RAIN p742 - Rough Stuff

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I really don't like this page.  I know where I wanted to go with it, but no matter how many times I reread it, I worry I'm not conveying it well.  I was still tweaking the dialogue on this one as recently as ten minutes ago.  I'm sure I'll find out soon enough how I did though.  I imagine this one will elicit a lot of varied responses either way, so I'll just let you take it from here.


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Er-hem.  I hope this doesn't detract from story-related comments, but as you may or may not have heard, I've got an appointment for SRS consultation scheduled for the end of the month.  Maybe - just maybe - something good will be in my future.  This also means your help was never more welcome if you're willing and/or able.  Buying books, or shirts, or scarves/wristbands, or just plain donations are all very helpful right now.  Obviously, if you are unable to or don't want to offer anything, that's totally fine.  There are other ways you can help.  Like voting for Rain on TopWebComics or joining/sharing the Facebook page can help spread the word about my work.  Thanks for anything you can do; no hard feelings if you can't.  ^_^