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Here's a little behind-the-scenes for you.  The Kylie/Drew meetup was in fact scripted for the previous chapter.  I swear that scene is cursed though.  I wrote, rewrote, scrapped, wrote again, and finally wrote once more that scene to make it work.  When I was finally satisfied enough, Photoshop crashed on me twice in the making of said scene, losing my work in the process.  Then, while I was on my sick hiatus for two months, I actually considered writing it as a side piece in prose.  I lost that too.  I'm so frustrated with the scene for putting me through all this.  And if I didn't think it was important, I would totally leave it out completely.

So, if you think it's a strange decision to go back and talking about this scene after the fact, instead of just posting it in real time where it would fit chronologically: you're right.  Because I wanted to post it in order.  All existence was just against me on this one for some reason.

There are actually a lot of other things to take note of on this page.  I just needed to vent that out, and now seemed like a good time.


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Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.

Also, in case you hadn't heard: after a recent visit with the oncologist, there is more surgery definitely in my future and more serious than last time (details another day).  This will probably mean another lengthy hiatus (though I hope not as long as last time).  I don't have a surgery date set yet, but obviously I'll let you know as soon as I do.  Either way, I'm just gonna keep on posting for the time being; I've probably got at least a couple weeks until then.  I just want everyone to be aware.

I don't like asking for help, but donations and book sales would probably help me out a lot at this time.  Don't sweat it if you have nothing to spare, but if you can help, anything would be most welcome.  Thank you.
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Well I think that Rain and Emily would be cute and work,  but I kind of want that. I wouldn't say that Emily is shy, though I think she is more neurotic than shy, she kind of wants people to think of her in certain way, and maybe she is starting to change that and not care as much about what people think of her, though she probably would not really want to tell anyone her true orientation.  Maria looks like she is thinking back to Emily or, maybe she still kind of likes her a little. I don't think I would have seen Gavin's phone if Rudy had not said it. And I would have found it interesting to see Ky and Drew together especially if she was in girl mode. It probably would have shaken him up a bit to see a girl, though if he can understand who Ky is it might work out for them.