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Kind of a choppy page, but it’s more in the favor of moving things along (otherwise it’d be like three pages of completely unnecessary filler). Hopefully, you still get the important points.
Still, I kinda like this page. The last panel is so bittersweet.
[EDIT] - Perhaps it was too subtle?
Fara talks to Colin in the beginning of the chapter - [link]
Because of how things go, she is left with the impression that for Christmas to go smoothly, either Colin has to know about Rain, or Aiken does (or both). Fara has not been seen since then, and has apparently been out at the car for all this time, and on the first panel of page 283, Fara is wiping her eyes. Based on her line in the final panel, one might be able to assume, she called him back and told him... and he didn't respond well to it. Based on reactions I'm hearing, this may not have been entirely clear. I apologize.
©2004-2012
Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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Prev - [link]
Next - [link]
Kind of a choppy page, but it’s more in the favor of moving things along (otherwise it’d be like three pages of completely unnecessary filler). Hopefully, you still get the important points.
Still, I kinda like this page. The last panel is so bittersweet.
[EDIT] - Perhaps it was too subtle?
Fara talks to Colin in the beginning of the chapter - [link]
Because of how things go, she is left with the impression that for Christmas to go smoothly, either Colin has to know about Rain, or Aiken does (or both). Fara has not been seen since then, and has apparently been out at the car for all this time, and on the first panel of page 283, Fara is wiping her eyes. Based on her line in the final panel, one might be able to assume, she called him back and told him... and he didn't respond well to it. Based on reactions I'm hearing, this may not have been entirely clear. I apologize.
©2004-2012
Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
Want a copy of Rain - Volume 1?!
Want a cute, little Puddle plushie?
Want to support me without spending money?
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Shouldn't Rain's text be slanted in the 6th panel?
(Tell me if it is an artistic choice NOT to have it slanted, because I intend on having it be slanted in the french version.)