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RAIN p282 - Together by JocelynSamara RAIN p282 - Together by JocelynSamara
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I sort of hate the way I brought Maria and Chanel into this arc. I kinda wanted to do a lot more with them, but I felt like their role seemed mostly disjointed to everything else going on that it was hard to work in. That said, I didn’t feel I could leave them out entirely. This little segment with everybody seeing everybody and Chanel pretty much learning everyone’s truths all at once kind of helps reattach them to the plot after all.

Theory time: Will Rain actually come out? Would she even need to at this point?

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Doomdragon Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
In my personal opinion I feel that Aiken is going to Hulk out by the time they start explaining
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thediremoose Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
AIKEN SMASH PUNY TEENAGERS!
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Vegeta5887 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
I blew through every page till now in two days.
HNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG
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isha-quetzal Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Poor Rain. But also poor Chanel. I hope she starts feeling less left out now, though.
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Musicallover1234 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student Writer
Well this is a good page and brings up a lot of good things. Now everyone knows about everyone else and they are all together. Regardless of whether or not Rain decides to tell her brother she learned that since nobody thinks any less of her that even if her brother hates her she still has a family that she can turn to and that's the best thing that anyone can have. I hope she does tell her brother because I think she can tell him, and it will straighten things out a bit in the story too.
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KurtCoBlainebows Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'M SCARED
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mckenmic Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
im with you. but im realy wana know how he will take it. ><
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kazuhiramiller Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
i squeed and loved this page... and then... [link] is now stuck in my head x3
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trichter43 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
Guess if she does it, she will dread her decision, but it's for the best.
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PrincessJessica Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
ooh...
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