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I’m wondering if it’s going to be a popular page…
Uh, about the second page, I have to be honest, that’s the first time I’ve ever drawn something like that. So, I was all like, “I guess I should… look up a reference.” So, I’m on DeviantArt, and I go a-searchin’. The really shocking thing, was how hard it was to FIND a reference. I kept finding fanart of a certain really fast super hero, and little animated shorts about anything, really. Considering how dirty this place has become over the years, I’m just surprised to not find what I was looking for more easily. I was uncomfortable looking for it anyway (I’m really not that kind of person), so I ended up just kind of drawing it. It’s far from perfect, but for not using a reference on something I’ve never drawn, I AM a little impressed with myself.
As for WHY this happened, well… it’s possible it wasn’t a fully thought out plan. Gavin was completely missing the point, and this was frustrating Kylie (yes, that is supposed to be ironic considering the exchange between Kylie and Rain in the last chapter). In the end, this was the best idea that came to mind. And, well, it worked but… uh, yeah, you all know how these things go.
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Red Sophia: "What do you think of THESE?"
Cerebus: "Cerebus thinks they'd heal if you stopped wearing chain mail bikinis."
how did she manage hiding those for so long o.O I mean I know it's a fanfic thing but c'mon their kinda big
But just out of curiosity, what do you mean "fanfic". It's not fanfiction; this is my story, so it would really just be "fiction".
That said....well, not much else to day. Only that I'm reminded of Zelda/Shiek for some reason.
I actually tried the back angle first, but it looked even worse. When you couldn't see the front, you're unable to see Kylie's bra, and everyone's led to believe Gavin got the complete show. That was when I decided the current angle was important; I didn't want there to be any mistake as to what Gavin was seeing. It's important to understand that Kylie ONLY revealed these to make a point, and wouldn't have done so under normal circumstances.
Just a thought: Don't they usually lock the janitor's closets?
That said, because the door should be locked, I included Gavin's fourth-wall breaking line in the first panel of the second page.
Don't worry abou tthe final panel, either - you did fine; it's quite obvious what you were trying to get across.
Rudy, quite out of nowhere, then mentions to her... Dude, you're still flashing them.
Poor Gavin keeps getting shock-educated
Way to go, Kylie.