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I’m wondering if it’s going to be a popular page…

Uh, about the second page, I have to be honest, that’s the first time I’ve ever drawn something like that. So, I was all like, “I guess I should… look up a reference.” So, I’m on DeviantArt, and I go a-searchin’. The really shocking thing, was how hard it was to FIND a reference. I kept finding fanart of a certain really fast super hero, and little animated shorts about anything, really. Considering how dirty this place has become over the years, I’m just surprised to not find what I was looking for more easily. I was uncomfortable looking for it anyway (I’m really not that kind of person), so I ended up just kind of drawing it. It’s far from perfect, but for not using a reference on something I’ve never drawn, I AM a little impressed with myself.

As for WHY this happened, well… it’s possible it wasn’t a fully thought out plan. Gavin was completely missing the point, and this was frustrating Kylie (yes, that is supposed to be ironic considering the exchange between Kylie and Rain in the last chapter). In the end, this was the best idea that came to mind. And, well, it worked but… uh, yeah, you all know how these things go.

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:iconjrobbins:
jrobbins Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015
XD How forward!
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:iconnowigreen:
NowiGreen Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh snap!
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InhumanCreator Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014  Student General Artist
bombs fired... gavins mind = blown
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:iconshockwave1111:
Shockwave1111 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
To quote American dad: woah! Gavin caught those full in the face. If those were guns Gavin would be dead XD 
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:iconjamieagatharose:
JamieAgathaRose Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'd say this was a swing and a miss on Gavin's part, but clearly he was caught looking.

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Fairportfan Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013

Red Sophia: "What do you think of THESE?"


Cerebus: "Cerebus thinks they'd heal if you stopped wearing chain mail bikinis."

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RunawayFantasy Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, that was the easiest and quickest way to prove it, I suppose. XD
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LilSlut93 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
seeing this brings up the question
how did she manage hiding those for so long o.O I mean I know it's a fanfic thing but c'mon their kinda big
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Professional Writer
Binding, plus loose-fitting sweatshirt. I can't guarantee that that would work so perfectly, but I'm also pretty bad with proportions.

But just out of curiosity, what do you mean "fanfic". It's not fanfiction; this is my story, so it would really just be "fiction".
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Tigerfestivals Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Some of my friends seem to not know what a fanfic is either. They'll say "oh, Tony, so you're drawing a fan fiction comic" when its not even based on another series. I guess they just that since I'm a "fan" it must be fan fiction or something...it can get a little annoying.
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LilSlut93 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
meh
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:iconmckenmic:
mckenmic Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
dam i love that face XD
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Fallenangel2002 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
lol man he should of believed her XD
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:iconneonate345678:
neonate345678 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
When you were looking for a reference, did you also happen upon a certain robot master made by Dr. Wily?
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Professional Writer
Heh. Oddly, no.
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:iconneonate345678:
neonate345678 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
Aww...

Someone made a joke using flash mans name on a webcomic called Bob & George (The Webcomic is completed)
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dolphin64575 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
... It... works... I don't think I'd be brave enough to do that in front of a guy, though.
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mckenmic Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
ROFL XD
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Ryu890 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
For the record, if you didn't WANT to show it, you could have just switched the angle a bit. Had us looking over Kylie's shoulder.


That said....well, not much else to day. Only that I'm reminded of Zelda/Shiek for some reason.
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Professional Writer
I never said I didn't want to show it. I just didn't want to research it. :XD:

I actually tried the back angle first, but it looked even worse. When you couldn't see the front, you're unable to see Kylie's bra, and everyone's led to believe Gavin got the complete show. That was when I decided the current angle was important; I didn't want there to be any mistake as to what Gavin was seeing. It's important to understand that Kylie ONLY revealed these to make a point, and wouldn't have done so under normal circumstances.
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Ryu890 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Point. :P

Just a thought: Don't they usually lock the janitor's closets?
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Professional Writer
I've done janitorial work before, and yes, you're always supposed to lock the door. That doesn't mean everyone does though. It's very easy to break into one. It's just pointless as there's nothing in there.

That said, because the door should be locked, I included Gavin's fourth-wall breaking line in the first panel of the second page.
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neonate345678 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Wait, it broke the Fourth wall? I can't believe I missed that...

...Okay, maybe I can. Mostly because it was VERY subtle.
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:iconryu890:
Ryu890 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Point.

Unrelated: My mind is convinced that male-version Ky would look good with a small gotee thing.
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atsuyuri-sama Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my. GOD! :lmao: This was hilarious!

Don't worry abou tthe final panel, either - you did fine; it's quite obvious what you were trying to get across.
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JamieAgathaRose Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And then in a hilarious fourth wall breaking moment. Ky turns to the readers and ask them what they're staring at. Eyes up, boys. EYES UP!

Rudy, quite out of nowhere, then mentions to her... Dude, you're still flashing them.
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Shadowdragon1997 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
But yeah BOOBS!
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Shadowdragon1997 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
0_0 there.....bigger than they look
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Suki-chan36 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Irrelevant typo catch: In the fourth panel of page 267, Gavin says "This is first time in the past four months...", when he should be saying "This is the first time in the past four months".
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GodzillaRulz Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Professional General Artist
that was rather...unexpected. but gavin's face is priceless XD
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ZorrieInuyama Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That was shocking.
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Musicallover1234 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student Writer
Well I think pretty much everyone knew that Kylie was a girl. But that was a pretty shocking things to do, i don't think Kylie though it all the way though it makes me wonder if she's going to do it again to confirm that. I love Gavin's face when Kylie shows off. And then Gavin's reaction is classic, wow! Ky's got boobs is what's running though his mind. This is going to be a very interesting turn of events and I wonder how Gavin will react to it.
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VioletUke93 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I was expecting binders :XD:
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AuraVampyre Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
YES! Gavin's mind is broken!
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isha-quetzal Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
I figured Kylie was a girl physically cos of how her sister acted. Kind of how Rain's siblings all call her "brother". Kylie's sister doesn't seem too accepting. More like she tries to be, kind of, but doesn't know enough about it to be really, really supportive.

Poor Gavin keeps getting shock-educated :P
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atrofiatedone Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
I had to register in order to see this update, but I do not regret it.

Way to go, Kylie.
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KurtCoBlainebows Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
boobs
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:iconsharles25:
SHarles25 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
hehe, images are worth a 1000 words, Kylie just skipped the whole explanations =D
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:iconanimasword:
Animasword Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
O_o Well...that's one way to break the news I guess.
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:iconxallamax:
Xallamax Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yay! Boobs! :D
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:iconfreddy-kun:
Freddy-kun Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Holy shit, boobs!
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:iconmaruul:
maruul Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Poor Gavin. He really tries.
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louisdragon109 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
when nothing else works
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:iconjenvas:
Jenvas Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
yeah, the boobs allways do the job. good to have non-fake ones...
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Saborous Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
sorry im too lazy to go through all the comments but wasn't it mentioned that Kylie was a girl when fara met her?
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Professional Writer
The readers have known about Kylie's birth gender for some time. Technically, it was spoiled by big sister Heather WAY back when they were introduced (revealed here - [link] and then made unmistakable here - [link]).

But the characters besides Fara (like Gavin) have not known...
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PerilsOfRosella Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Professional General Artist
Fara always knew, no one else did.
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:iconsaborous:
Saborous Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
well i meant for us readers that it had been revealed... there seem to be alot of readers surprised that she is in fact female
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:iconcoffinstufferd:
coffinstufferd Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Do I hear fapping?
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:iconjamieagatharose:
JamieAgathaRose Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're on the intrawebz, of course you hear fapping. :censored:
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