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RAIN p215 - Courage by JocelynSamara RAIN p215 - Courage by JocelynSamara
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Crazy page. So many points I want to make! Iíll focus on the big things.

Brother Arthurís explanation of how he figured it out actually has a second purpose, moreso from a technical standpoint for me as the writer than anything plot-related. For the longest time, I got really hung up on how Rain could be enrolled in a school like this when her legal name doesnít match the name she goes by. After all, Iím relatively certain such documents must be presented upon enrollment; the fact is, I donít know if in real life anyone COULD go through high school without ANYONE knowing who they are. Members of the faculty would probably have to know. Itís a minor, forgettable hole that one could easily overlook because it IS fiction, but I guess it bothers me. Hence, this sort of explains it. Sort ofÖ ishÖ

Also, I changed the dialogue SO MANY TIMES on this one. This page may have won the award for most dialogue rewrites of any in the story thus far. From Rainís reaction, to Brother Arthurís speech, I probably spent a literal day pacing around my apartment working out this dialogue. Itís still a little campy towards the end, but I think I generally like it for the most part.

Anyway, big important page. But I hope you all like it.

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Casylum Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014  New member Student General Artist
Awwwe D,: 
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Harryeagle Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
Brother Arthur: Good man. :) Unless there's a really unexpected twist coming...
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Kinuna Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
T_T I'm gonna cry
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Sumrr Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
Wow... tears... take two.'

Very good job.
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AdventureMB Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
Wow that was ones of harder thinks can do Forget  
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Turai Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
Read this far in one day, and while I always liked Arthur from what little I had seen, you know those small things like dropping the name lists etc.

This tough? Yeah sorry Rudy, Arthur just bitch slapped you away from "Turai's favorite character" spot. He bitch slapped you hard.

This guy is...YES..I don't know, I lack words. Yes he was prob a dick to his brother, but he's regretting it enough to break the school rules and possibly loss of his job just to make amends.

I don't know why, but damn I like this char.

Also, can you really be expelled from a school in the US for Homosexuallity? America you scary.
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Wiinner159 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
Even though this is a couple months old I will still say, no you can't get expelled from a regular school for being gay, (if so a couple people I know wouldn't be there) but for a Christian school like that yeah it's possible, as like Brother Arthur said, homosexuality is viewed as a sin, why Rudy hasn't already been expelled... well this IS fiction after all, so Jocelyn can get away with that
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Fallenangel2002 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Go Rudy, sticking up for your GF ya!
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geneseepaws Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
OMG, you made me cry. Wow, that's not easy. Some folks have terribly complex lives. Mine isn't, But I have friends who don't know how to come out. Or which way to swing. Or how to dress. People can be soooo cruel.
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OrangeDemi Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
arthur gets points in my book
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