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Crazy page. So many points I want to make! Iíll focus on the big things.
Brother Arthurís explanation of how he figured it out actually has a second purpose, moreso from a technical standpoint for me as the writer than anything plot-related. For the longest time, I got really hung up on how Rain could be enrolled in a school like this when her legal name doesnít match the name she goes by. After all, Iím relatively certain such documents must be presented upon enrollment; the fact is, I donít know if in real life anyone COULD go through high school without ANYONE knowing who they are. Members of the faculty would probably have to know. Itís a minor, forgettable hole that one could easily overlook because it IS fiction, but I guess it bothers me. Hence, this sort of explains it. Sort ofÖ ishÖ
Also, I changed the dialogue SO MANY TIMES on this one. This page may have won the award for most dialogue rewrites of any in the story thus far. From Rainís reaction, to Brother Arthurís speech, I probably spent a literal day pacing around my apartment working out this dialogue. Itís still a little campy towards the end, but I think I generally like it for the most part.
Anyway, big important page. But I hope you all like it.
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