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RAIN p210+211 - Heather by JocelynSamara RAIN p210+211 - Heather by JocelynSamara
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The second page here is extremely experimental, but for obvious reasons, I didnít want it to stand alone. And yet, I also didnít want to leave it out.

Thoughts on ANY part of this are entirely welcome.

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Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.

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nuric Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
I liked the dramatic twist at the end.   I might be mad at Heather for 'outing' Rain, but it was a good twist.    Structurally, though, the second page would have looked better if, instead of white empty space, you'd have just had pictures of Heather leaving and going home, perhaps just three panels of her walking out the door, across the lawn or up stairs or something similar.
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trichter43 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
D: What a cliff hanger
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OtherSideNight Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really don't understand how Heather found out...
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Fallenangel2002 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
lol really long page than a small panle saying Rain's a dude LoL XD
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dolphin64575 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
For a second I thought that second page was going to be a 'just kidding, here's the real panel' thing.
But ASDFPOIUYTRESDJKLOIUYTRDSXCVB NO WORDS
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Tanooki-Tom Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
O_o
...How the HELL did she figure that out?!
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LadySerena Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Heather broke it. Rain now knows, and Ky how has damn good reason.
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