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RAIN p181 - Spiteful by JocelynSamara RAIN p181 - Spiteful by JocelynSamara
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Yup. Holly and Devon. Having them chat at the Halloween party was a pretty spur-of-the-moment decision moreso to include two side characters who didnít really do much overall during that chapter. But I dunno, when I saw them standing next to each other, I felt like it just worked. So, I hooked them up. Why not? It felt right. And what can I say? Iíve been enjoying developing the secondary characters.

But also, more importantly, Emily dumps Chase. After the Halloween party fiasco, largely caused by Chase, it shouldnít be too surprising. Really, heís lucky she didnít report him to the police.

And as much as I feel bad for Emily (it sucks not being in a relationship when it seems like everyone else is doing so well), I admit Iíve been in Debbieís shoes too (hating your friendís partner so much you get satisfaction out of them breaking up).

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LittleWolfDreamer Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Professional Writer
I want to high five Debbie
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chihuahua0 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Student Writer
They got me laughing. :lol"

One couple goes out, one goes in. I wonder if...Hevon (or is it Dolly?) will go somewhere.
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Professional Writer
I'm rather fond of Hevon myself, because it sounds like "heaven". How can you go wrong with a pairing name like that? ^_^
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SongoftheWolves Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
I always get happy when my friend breaks up with her boyfriends.I feel bad,but they're all jerks.Egotistical,arrogant jerks...
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Suki-chan36 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
This page further serves to feed my Debbie Theory. Also, for some odd reason, I really like Holly and Devon together. xD
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012  Professional Writer
I feel dumb for asking but have you mentioned your Debbie Theory? I'm intrigued, but I don't remember it.

Also, yay! I'm glad I'm not the only who likes "Hevon". :XD:
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Suki-chan36 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012
I have not yet mentioned my Debbie Theory, in fact, so no need to feel dumb. My theory is that Debbie has a crush on Emily - she's just really good at hiding it or she hasn't realized it yet.

"Hevon"? I c wut u did thar. xD (Sounds better than "Delly", in any case. =P)
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Musicallover1234 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Student Writer
Rain seems to have made some more friends, there probably just asking her how the kiss went though. And Emily was just trying to over do it that's why she didn't have fun at her party. And it seems that we have a new couple as well.
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Animasword Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I was wondering how that relationship was going to work if the two of them were fighting all night :lol:
Nice update
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Professional Writer
On the one hand: good point.

On the other: I can't tell you how many couples I've known to be together for YEARS, when I've never seen or heard of them doing anything other than hating each others' guts. You'd be surprised how many functioning couples I've seen that are like that. Hell, even look at Emily getting all mopey here; she dumped him over this and she already seems to miss him!
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Animasword Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Fair point; there are many couples who fight over small things every day, but there has to be something to keep them coming back, and Chase seems to be a pretty shallow/intratating guy, so I don't think many could stand him for long. Plus one could argue that Emily is annoyed by her failure to the relationship going rather than actually missing Chase (then again, I'm not the author so I could be completly wrong :lol: )
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Q9R42 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Totally get it. Except in my case, i ended up in a relationship with my friend instead, and religion was involved with her ex-boyfriend. It was a mess.
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On2XSecretProbation Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well Chase did call her a drag queen so she's probably happy she won't have to see him again...

Good to know that at least two people weren't traumatized by the party!
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Doomdragon Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah Emily! You show him who's boss! Who needs... um... Chevy was it...? Chance...? Caroline...? Betty...? Ah well regardless he was a jerk always forgetting peoples names and such
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Professional Writer
I thought his name was Guillermo? ;P
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Doomdragon Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh man... GUILLERMO!! I TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT THAT THEORY!!! Oh man... new found respect, I tip my hat to you. I pretty much just fell over laughing just now, I'm surprised you remembered that and I didn't xD
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Professional Writer
:bow:

Let it be said that read and pay attention to everything my readers say. ^_^

In the case of the "Guillermo Theory", I was so entertained by it, I really did consider making a Rain Delay about it in the very least. I just never got around to it.
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Doomdragon Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Seriously? Wow I feel pretty damn accomplished that I almost caused a Rain Delay. Well luckily it's one of those things that you can put it off until whenever and then if you ever feel like doing it BAM it's there xD

Also I feel I should note that during that last comment I was playing FFXIII (first one not the second) on my Xbox and I was actually laughing so hard I had to pause it in the middle of one of the most important events/battles of the game xD
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chitttick1 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012
I'm starting to think Debbie might be my fav secondary character now, just cause she's awesome.
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Undertaker972 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012
well its your story, if you feel hooking up Holly and Devon is the right way to go, im all for it. i figured Chase and Emily would break up, he did cause a lot of problems by serving alcohol at the party
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louisdragon109 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
someone forgot the y in party ;P
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Professional Writer
Ach! How embarrassing! Thank you! Fixing now! ^^;
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louisdragon109 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha at least it'll be fixed ;P
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