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RAIN p179 - Gossip Girl by JocelynSamara RAIN p179 - Gossip Girl by JocelynSamara
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Starting now, I’m going to be naming the present day of the story whenever it changes from this point on. There has been a lot of confusion about the flow of time in the past, and I’m hoping this will adequately clear things up. I will also be (slowly but surely) retroactively going back and adding dates to pages throughout the first seven chapters as well. Please note, I will not be dating every page; just ones when the in-story date changes. In other words, if I don’t mention the date for so many pages, you can safely assume it’s the same date that was last mentioned. I hope that helps everyone.

On a completely unrelated note, if you’re familiar with my (indefinitely) unfinished story, “Lavender Town” (which has nothing to do with Pokemon), you may recognize Lavie and Amanda in panel 5. When I needed random girl designs, these two just popped into my head. Obviously, it can’t REALLY be them. Their personalities are all wrong and they’re in the wrong school (and wrong town). As such, they’re really just lookalikes. But I’m not above a shameless cameo like that once in a while. Um, the other girls are just girls though.

If you’re interested in “Lavender Town”, you can check that out here – [link]

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Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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mckenmic Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
i like that one girl XD
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TenaKitten Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
Gossips @_@ I hate them so much.
Why do people have to ask each other about a stranger person instead of that person personally?
Always?!
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spookyfoxmulder Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Baw. Rain, I'd hug you.
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coffinstufferd Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
do you ever feel an inner resistance writing character's dialogue such as this?
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Cheese4lunch2 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
As more time goes by, I realize more and more how much I hate much of my generation.
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PrincessJessica Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
lol
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Musicallover1234 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Student Writer
Poor Rain within the first few seconds of walking she gets nailed with questions. And now there are going to be rumors about her all throughout the school.I wonder how she is going to manage all of this. I love how Emily walks by all pissed off not like its Rain's fault thou. Interesting that the one unnamed girl wishes her boyfriend was gay so she could make him straight. And then Lavie and Amanda are at the wrong school this is going to be a very interesting day.
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atsuyuri-sama Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't wait to see where this goes! And the uneducated state of the pale masses is funny in a sarcastic, uninspiring way (not your interpretation of them, just of 'them' in general). I want to see Rudy and hear his explaination at last!
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14bj337 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
Silly Amanda and Lavie! They go to St. Mulligan, so what are they doing at St. Hallvard? Miss Marshall will slaughter them for being late...

Seriously, though, it looks like word of Rain and Rudy's... interaction... has made it to even the colorless masses. Of course, they sound just as ignorant as everyone at the party, with the idea that homosexuality can be "cured" (I don't know why, but I find that girl's comment in panel 6 to be really funny). Unfortunately, it looks like this is how Rain's whole day is going to go. In fact, the only one who doesn't seem fascinated is Emily, who's been in grudge mode against Rain since day one. And speaking of day, I like the addition of the date to the top of the page! Most of the time, it is rather clear, but I know I've been confused at least once regarding the date, so this little inclusion should be helpful for everyone.

Now that we see what Rain has to endure, I wonder if Rudy's going to be at the guys' center of attention. Good god, they're probably going to congratulate him for "straightening up" *shudder*. Regardless, a promising start to the chapter!
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MakotoTaka Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Rain.
In fact, poor Rudy, somehow I can imagine girls lining up to ask him out because they think he's been 'cured'.
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