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RAIN p142 - Cutie by JocelynSamara RAIN p142 - Cutie by JocelynSamara
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Somehow this didnít translate from my script to the page as well as I meant it to. In the third panel, Rob suggests that Drew could be hooked up with Rudy. This actually has nothing to do with Rudy being dressed as a girl, because they really havenít gotten a good look at him yet (obviously, otherwise Drew probably would not be doing what heís about to do). However, rereading this page a few times, I wonder if that fact is not as clear as it should be. Whoops.

Highlight of the page: Still, I could just go back and forth between panels 3 and 4 over and over and over again.

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DragonAnthro5213 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i would die of laughter if this happened in real life
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Ryu890 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
It...really isn't. :P If Rudy crossdressing offended Rain...then him crossdressing and pulling it off so well that he gets asked out on his first try....Oh geez. I hope she's in another room. Or something.
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Brixmon Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011
Oh ho ho- NOOooooooooooo... pff... awkward mode ENGAGE
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UsagiKnight Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, I love seeing maria with her fixed expression hitting Rob over and over again.

Though I have to admit that I would agree with you that dialogue is the only thing that is awkward, if you were to look at the panels themselves you would probably understand it more. But again, I'm not a grand dialogue expert so I can't say much. But I guess the problem is how it transition,"how gay his costume looked" "let's pair him with your brother" I guess would imply that him dating Rudy would make drew more of a man. But I guess the english language is just complicated.

I also agree with Gavin that most likely Rudy will just play with Drew for a bit, it will be very vendictive on his part. But its halloween, what would be the point without the fun.

And I'm happy to see a little cameo of Aidyn and Madison, they look great in their feudal period costumes. Al that is missing is a snowman dressed like an Oni
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Maiden-Of-The-Maggot Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
That ninja dun got slapped! O:<
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14bj337 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011
Poor Drew! If it's any consolation, I don't think his costume looks "gay" at all! Maybe if he had an earring...

Seriously, though, I LOVE THIS PAGE. The irony is so beautiful; to prove his heterosexuality, Drew decides to ask out a girl. Who's actually a guy. Not only that, but Rob suggests that Drew and Rudy hook up. Right before Drew unwittingly asks Rudy out. The sheer amount of irony in this page makes me laugh every time I read it! One of the best-written jokes in "Rain" so far. I can't wait to see Drew and "Ruby" interact (and I especially look forward to Drew's moment of shock and horror!).

Beyond the joke, though, this page brings the main characters (three of them, at least) into contact with the minor characters. I especially like Maria's "THWACK!" on Rob; honestly, he had it coming. And Rob and Devon's looks of surprise, upon hearing that Drew's new target is, in fact, Rudy, are just priceless. Plus, we get to see Aidyn and Madison's costumes for the first time. Honestly, if they weren't pointed out, I probably wouldn't recognize them; they deserve to win the costume contest (which is definitely happening because it's not like something they just made up) for sure. I also like Drew's depressed squiggle-grumble in panel 2, as well as his look of determination in panel 7. And finally, Thank you Gavin! for not letting Maria cut short what is sure to be a fantasticly hilariously awkward situation!

This page works really well; it provides a seamless combination of the minor guys' storyline and the main characters' storyline, as well as introducing two more characters. Plus, it features an awesome set-up that leaves the reader demanding more!
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IchinaruKuramaki Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011
so where's today's page? :P
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JillianNC Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011
Had a similar situation at a showing of the Rocky Horror Picture show once, my first time out dressed in front of friends. It got...interesting.
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FenrirDarkWolfe Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Student General Artist
Oh the irony. I agree with Gavin.
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Earthren Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011
shouldn't his first hint have been the lack of a costume? nonetheless, I'm sure this'll be fun
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