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Somehow this didnít translate from my script to the page as well as I meant it to. In the third panel, Rob suggests that Drew could be hooked up with Rudy. This actually has nothing to do with Rudy being dressed as a girl, because they really havenít gotten a good look at him yet (obviously, otherwise Drew probably would not be doing what heís about to do). However, rereading this page a few times, I wonder if that fact is not as clear as it should be. Whoops.

Highlight of the page: Still, I could just go back and forth between panels 3 and 4 over and over and over again.

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:icondragonanthro5213:
DragonAnthro5213 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i would die of laughter if this happened in real life
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Ryu890 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
It...really isn't. :P If Rudy crossdressing offended Rain...then him crossdressing and pulling it off so well that he gets asked out on his first try....Oh geez. I hope she's in another room. Or something.
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Brixmon Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011
Oh ho ho- NOOooooooooooo... pff... awkward mode ENGAGE
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UsagiKnight Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah, I love seeing maria with her fixed expression hitting Rob over and over again.

Though I have to admit that I would agree with you that dialogue is the only thing that is awkward, if you were to look at the panels themselves you would probably understand it more. But again, I'm not a grand dialogue expert so I can't say much. But I guess the problem is how it transition,"how gay his costume looked" "let's pair him with your brother" I guess would imply that him dating Rudy would make drew more of a man. But I guess the english language is just complicated.

I also agree with Gavin that most likely Rudy will just play with Drew for a bit, it will be very vendictive on his part. But its halloween, what would be the point without the fun.

And I'm happy to see a little cameo of Aidyn and Madison, they look great in their feudal period costumes. Al that is missing is a snowman dressed like an Oni
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Maiden-Of-The-Maggot Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
That ninja dun got slapped! O:<
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14bj337 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011
Poor Drew! If it's any consolation, I don't think his costume looks "gay" at all! Maybe if he had an earring...

Seriously, though, I LOVE THIS PAGE. The irony is so beautiful; to prove his heterosexuality, Drew decides to ask out a girl. Who's actually a guy. Not only that, but Rob suggests that Drew and Rudy hook up. Right before Drew unwittingly asks Rudy out. The sheer amount of irony in this page makes me laugh every time I read it! One of the best-written jokes in "Rain" so far. I can't wait to see Drew and "Ruby" interact (and I especially look forward to Drew's moment of shock and horror!).

Beyond the joke, though, this page brings the main characters (three of them, at least) into contact with the minor characters. I especially like Maria's "THWACK!" on Rob; honestly, he had it coming. And Rob and Devon's looks of surprise, upon hearing that Drew's new target is, in fact, Rudy, are just priceless. Plus, we get to see Aidyn and Madison's costumes for the first time. Honestly, if they weren't pointed out, I probably wouldn't recognize them; they deserve to win the costume contest (which is definitely happening because it's not like something they just made up) for sure. I also like Drew's depressed squiggle-grumble in panel 2, as well as his look of determination in panel 7. And finally, Thank you Gavin! for not letting Maria cut short what is sure to be a fantasticly hilariously awkward situation!

This page works really well; it provides a seamless combination of the minor guys' storyline and the main characters' storyline, as well as introducing two more characters. Plus, it features an awesome set-up that leaves the reader demanding more!
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IchinaruKuramaki Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011
so where's today's page? :P
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:iconjilliannc:
JillianNC Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011
Had a similar situation at a showing of the Rocky Horror Picture show once, my first time out dressed in front of friends. It got...interesting.
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FenrirDarkWolfe Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Student General Artist
Oh the irony. I agree with Gavin.
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:iconearthren:
Earthren Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011
shouldn't his first hint have been the lack of a costume? nonetheless, I'm sure this'll be fun
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majorkerina Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Student Writer
*eyebrow* Wow...hope they make a cute Halloween couple ^^.
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:iconcontractowner:
contractowner Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011
Drew reminds me of karl. (Law of talos)
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dolphin64575 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
oooooh man. Now let the boys whose names I don't remember stay quiet! Please!
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:iconfluffy-artist:
Fluffy-Artist Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
Oh wow.
This should be interesting.
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:icondaszepto:
DasZepto Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh jeez this is ironic. lets hope this ends as quick as it starts.
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Dark7Hero Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
OH I SEE A FIRE STARTING
quick let's grab marshmallows!
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BigRedTopHat Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Oh my gosh. He's going to either have a really bad night or a really good one.
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Q9R42 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This can only end well. Not being sarcastic. I think they'll marry each other in the end.
Yep! n.n
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Dinadan-Ermorfea Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I think that it's clear that panals 3&4 are refering to the fact that Rudy's gay rather than to his costume (in fact, until you pointed it out in your commentry, the alternate interpretation didn't even occur to me) :)
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chitttick1 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011
Ya same for me too, until she pointed it out, I didn't even notice the other interpretation.
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:iconmaruul:
maruul Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
Ohhh, poor Drew XD He may never live this down...
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Nelekra Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
Lol! This should be interesting.
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Usuakariyume Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
This happens to me a lot on MMOs. If I am male everyone will think my avi is female and if I am female they think my avi is male. Funnest time was when a guy used the "fall from heaven" line on me when I was male. It took me and another guy with a similar avi about 10 minutes to explain to him that we were male.

Also panel 3 made since to me. Favorite page that does not have Rain in it as well.
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Musicallover1234 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Student Writer
Oh boy, this is going to be awkward but not unexpected. Rudy will play along and when Drew finds out i think he will just pass out, this is a funny page and i am guessing so will the next one.
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Chicken-Yuki Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011   Traditional Artist
....irony.....
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SennaKoshiba Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
As awesome as it is, it wasn't all that clear ;3;
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Nericlak Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
I can taste the irony coming off this page....kinda spinachy to be honest...

GO FOR IT DREW!!! I HAZ TWO SHIPZZ TO FLOAT NAOW!!!!


Actually funny story. My old classmate in seventh grade, Patrick, went to a Halloween Party as a girl (no one figured it out for a few hours) and my friend Drew (technically Andrew but we had another Andrew in the class), who was dressed as either a hippy or a pirate was the second or so person to hit on "Patricia."
Good times, good times :D
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Undertaker972 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
lol so much awkwardness, i loved Maria slapping that guy across the head. and Drew asking out Rudy/Ruby? id do the same thing as Gavin, keep quiet and watch what happens xD
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Diggerman Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Professional General Artist
Oh you gotta be kidding me. This is probably my favorite page of this chapter so far! XD
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KirukaChan Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Inb4 Drew x Ruby becomes the most popular ship. A PIRATE ship, that is. And I am, of course, referring to a particular kind of pirate, which you will often find in the Navy.

...I'm terrible today.
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KingInYellowTatters Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
...Privateers?
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:iconkirukachan:
KirukaChan Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Ass pirate.
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:iconkinginyellowtatters:
KingInYellowTatters Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
Hmm. Makes me wonder if "ass privateers" exist. Ass pirates who have been sanctioned by their governments to have sex with lots of foreign guys.
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PrincessJessica Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
hmm...interesting :)
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:iconwhitefox00:
whitefox00 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I understood what was going on easily enough.
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JanusDaGuardian42 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Of course, Ruby, cutie, angel. Good luck, mate! God, I'm gonna throw up... lol
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Adam-LOVES-HTTYD Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Student
Oh my glob. xD Poor Drew, I can't even. xD
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DrakanorDream Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You are cruel ... I almost ... almost fell sorry for Drew
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:iconwerewolf-hero:
Werewolf-Hero Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Ruby is so cute I want to see the rest
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:iconchihuahua0:
chihuahua0 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Student Writer
You're making me laugh out my breakfast!

This is going to lead to awkwardness.
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