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Perhaps today’s page will be a little less… controversial?

Pro tip: If you’re planning on wearing a costume with wings for Halloween, I might recommend waiting until you get OUT of the car (if driving is necessary) to put them on. I speak from experience. Doors can be a pain. Car doors were worse. Of course, my experience also put me in the backseat of a two-door car. -_-

Highlight of the page: Panel 2 was tricky to draw, but I feel the end result is worth it. Cracks me up every time I look at it. ^_^

Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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Wiinner159 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
And this is why you ALWAYS call shotgun...
akainu0 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
Considering that Rain's costume is the most elaborate, wouldn't it be more convenient to sit in the front?
UsagiKnight Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
The only real comment to make for this page is: How the HELL did Maria get the front seat?
14bj337 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011
Perhaps it was through some sort of undisclosed combination of bribery, threats, and extortion? Or maybe she just got there first, and snarled everyone else away, like a mother badger defending its den. You don't want to mess with Maria.
BoiChick Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011
-gigglesnort- Yes, Ruby, watch your hands -- don't need to be gropin' Ky. XD
JimmieBrimstone Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011
I know she's not a favorate but I think Ruby looks Soooo cute :)
Musicallover1234 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011  Student Writer
Well that's an interesting drove over Maria got the luck of the draw on the ride thou. I am surprised the Rudy didn't find out about Ky with how crowded it looks. Aunt Fara looks to happy compared with the chaos in the back. Anyway big the big house looks interesting. Well on to the party i hope it will be fun.
dragonqueen18 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011
hope they all have lots of fun.
majorkerina Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011  Student Writer
@_@ Big house...Love panel 2 ^^.
forgottencake Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Also, make sure the wings are detachable if it's cold out, so you won't have to wear a coat over them.
Because...then you look like a hunchback. :C
14bj337 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
Hm... indulge in my latest obsession (Death Note), or leave another preposterously long comment? Sorry, L, but Rain was here first.

Hah, I really like this one. It's a case of truth-in-humor (or humor-in-truth), a sort of applied observational humor. Sitting in the back seat SUCKS, especially when you're sharing it with two or more people. Panel 2 is really good; I like how everyone's shoving for room in the back, with Aunt Fara laughing at them (on the inside, that is). Panel 1 also provides a great lead-in, by showing only part and referring to what's coming next. And the header in panel 3 is golden as well. Interesting to note how, in panel 4, Rain has noticed the allusions to Kaminari in her costume (one of the things I caught on the chapter 6 title page, especially considering the title, but failed to mention in my comment).

Aside from the dialogue, there's a lot to say about the art of this page. Even though their conversations are light, this is one of the darker pages (hahah... I think that might have been a pun). The focal point, though, is the house in panel 3. I will say this: it's good. Like, really good. Easily the best house you've drawn so far (possibly because it's from a straightforward, rather than angled, perspective). The dimensions still aren't perfect (the fence should be back a bit more, mainly), but it's shows a great improvement in your drawing of "landscapes". I hope there are more shots like this in later chapters, and that they get even better with time! Aside from that, we get a partial shot of Fara's evening wear! Even though we barely see anything, I can say that if I were ten years older and she were ten years y- *gets whacked by art project*.

...Ouch. Anyway, this is a really funny page. It serves to lighten the mood after yesterpage's drama, and to build up anticipation for the real party pages! I can't wait!
Nelekra Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
Haha I love the last panel :3
KirukaChan Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
What's funny is that taking into consideration Ruby's and Maria's current hairstyles, height and chest sizes, Ruby now looks like the older sibling.
dolphin64575 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
HAHAHAHAHAHA I never noticed that!
chitttick1 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
Maria's face in panel 2, just awesomeness.
COMPUTERMANMIK428 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
hahaha nice XD
Dracona-Wynne-Hale Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist
Backpacks with wings also don't work too well.
16bithero1995 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
This is why people come to my house
AdmrlWashinton Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
Yay Gavin is suffering, I don't care how small his suffering is it will always make me happy.
dolphin64575 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Fara's expression in panel 2!
YNot1989 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm just going to make a black felt beard and refer to myself as "Evil Insertname"
iDragoon Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
Can't wait to see more. Keep up the great work
FenrirDarkWolfe Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Student General Artist
Smart Maria, smart move. Of course, she wall like :|
Undertaker972 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
lol gotta love the fighting between them in the back seat. id be the smart one like Maria, calling shotgun xD
Dark7Hero Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011
im so looking forward to this
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