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RAIN p.95 - Castle by JocelynSamara RAIN p.95 - Castle by JocelynSamara
(Early. What else is new?)

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Sudden change in setting! I guess that’s the end “Trans 101”… for now…

This is a hard page to describe. I do and do not like this page, myself. I think I'll rather hear what you folks have to say about it though.

Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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6148 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I usually use the term "douchecanoe" but I shall now abandon it in favor of your douchecastle, your word has been swiped and you may now live through years of therapy knowing it was stolen from you forever and ever
thediremoose Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
Douchecastle (n.) Someone who goes so far beyond the normal definition of douchebag that a new word is needed to describe the sheer amount of douche.
the1smjb Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
Douchecastle, lol. I don't even know how to picture that...
janetcannady Featured By Owner May 29, 2013
I like the story. Your writing is very good, the pictures show their emotions so well, and these are very interesting & enjoyable characters.
Ryu890 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012
^_^ Awwww~
Brixmon Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011
I've gotta write that one down...
UsagiKnight Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
The most important thing about this page is simply parallel. Both Gavin and his mom were hurt because they were lied to. But at the same time it help Gavin see the contrast a bit. That yeah, Rain lied, but her wasn't "decieved", where as his mom was both lied to and decieved. And Looking back on Ms. Kurz recollection that Gavin didn't like the boyfriend on day one, wher as he had no opinions to Rain on chapter 1 showed that she will never be on the level of being called a DoucheCastle. In someway, it really is one of the best things to happen to Gavin this chapter, in that it does make things with Rain seem more understandable and less hurtful. And after the trans 101, this page was needed to help even Gavin out to his ever changing life. And to see him laugh with his mom is also very heart warming. Though many don't care for this page, I found something to like in it just as much as the other pages.

The paneling was good for this page too, it was laid out seperately but with the most important exchanges being with both the Kurz in the same panel. DoucheCastle being the dialogue that puts them on a similar wavelength that in someway they both know they are having different but similar problems. Important especially during the majority of the chapter Ms. Kurz was making fun of Gavin, though in someway just wants him to be happy. On the pajama page this was most obvious as she said "she's really cute", I guess knowing her time dating is failing she hopes that Gavin's time with girls is at least going well, especially since she knows about the break up with Maria. But I can definitely say that by itself it isn't that strong of a page, but knowing all the pages from before makes it a smiling dream in this drama filled story. And in someway makes me want to joke with my own mom.
Yin88 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Awwh~ Simultaneous Gavin and Mother comment! :D Loved it ;D <3
darkninja1012 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011
lol i love how he says i let her take my bed while i take the couch and then it gor to rain and she say that she cant sleep that was funny =D
chitttick1 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
That's weird, this didn't show up in my deviantwatch. Good thing I found it =D
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