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Nothing worse than missing a spot shaving or applying makeup. Except maybe not discovering that one has missed said spot until several hours later after having been in public all this time. But it happens to the best of us; even the most careful and neurotic people (like Rain) can be faulted sometimes.
Ah, yes. And Rain DOES have two eyes, see?
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I'm literally ROFLMAO-ing... XD
Well, lucky guess with the rooms then.
By the way, I guess this is just my personal taste, but I think Rain's prettiest feature are her eyes. Big and blue, they really giver her an innocent, almost doll-like visage.
Its especially difficult around the corners of my jaw. >_< Uuuugh.
But anyway, love the set up on this page. How you begin with Ms. Kurz facing Rain, than Rain facing Ms. Kurz, than the close up leading to her revelation. Ending finally on a very quick "WHERESTHEBATHROOM" moment. Its one of the most clever forms of scripting you have done so far for a joke. And I do encourage you to continue more well thought out situational humor. Especially with Both Kurz all narrowed and blank.
On the subject of Ms. Kurz, is she a lawyer. She sounds like she has deep connections to the law. If its a spoiler question you don't have to answer. It just sounds like it may casue some serious secrecy problems for Rain in the future. Such a pity that its hard to confess to either being beaten or being trans when either answer will take you in a messed up direction.
And as for your comment, that is why I don't even dress out (if that is the best phrase). Had to shave three times a day and I end up not getting rid of the shadow and on top of that look like I dissected my face. Definitely not a cute look for the public.
I know that feeling all too well, especially being as neurotic as I am
And it does most assuredly suck. Suck suck suck.
I like how this page shows that Rain can have occassional slip-ups; she's only human, after all. Of course, when she notices them, she's on top of it in a heartbeat. Still, this page opens the window for more pages regarding Rain's "status", particularly in relation to the fact that this is her first sleepover as a girl, and she can't go through her same home routine.
I also love Rain's rush, combined with Gavin's delayed reaction. Classic.
Is he/she still like a dude ( with the 'package) but his/her body look like a girl while wearing fake pads for the chest. Or did he/she had went undergo a sex change operation, but still have the "package"?
And you didn't let use see Rain's hidden eye! No...!
But I don't hate him. But I do want to whap him one.
It's not a problem for every man, but I think every male-to-female transsexual I've ever talked to (myself included) has a story to tell about very sudden, poorly timed appearance of five o'clock shadow...
I guess I can predict the future with this comic... but I can't prevent it, as I apparently didn't learn anything from Rain's mistake.