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RAIN p.71 - Rain's Feelings by JocelynSamara RAIN p.71 - Rain's Feelings by JocelynSamara
(Posting half an hour early in a half-hearted attempt to ensure that I don't stay up too late reading comments.)

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For as much dialogue as there is on this page, I feel like I don’t actually have a lot to say about this one.

So for an alternative to my question from the last page, if you were in Rain’s position, how would you approach Gavin?

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AlekPixi Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013   Writer
Just stumbled upon this page again (sometimes I just click around, I swear I'm not weird) - and was reminded that I always found it funny that Rain was allowed to read manga for days at a time at the bookstores without getting kicked out. My personal experience is that you can barely flip a few pages before you're told "this is not a library; you read it, you buy it." Maybe the place Rain went to was just super nice. Nontheless, why didn't she just go to the library? (I don't know if American libraries carry manga...?)
Just my two cents :)
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Ryu890 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
How would I approach Gavin? E-mail. I'd wanna make sure I worded everything right.

I'd then briefly explain that I wanted him back, but wouldn't be around him if he couldn't accept me as who I am.


Thats what I plan on doing with my Grandfather anyhow...who did more or less the same thing....
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eleventhdr Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
being a real girl means fainlly be able to share your real feeling with other girls! and i want that at last!
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UsagiKnight Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I would love to say that it was nice to have little happy otaku moment before we got back into the drama of it all. Though like Rain, I hold a record of 4 hours purely on book shopping. And I must say I'm happy to reap those rewards. I wouldn't doubt that you have your own private record.

But now that the love of Kaminari is done for now, we come back into the discomfort of the situation. And to be honest, the words 'before that it was.....' really is the best way toreintroduce that. I have to say your use of words really is one of my favorites because it does feel like real speech (as well as a mix of poetic literature). It is one of your strengths and I hope you continue to discover such marvelous interactions.

(really sorry for not reading in the past few weeks. I was really needed for something important. But remember that I will never forget the story that has helped me smile)
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dolphin64575 Featured By Owner May 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't really say what I'd do in Rain's position, I'm too busy flailing about saying 'Nooooooo! Don't cry!' in my head to imagine being in Rain's situation.

Rain and Gavin need to just sit down and talk it ALL out
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coffinstufferd Featured By Owner May 18, 2011
though i have not fully read this far, i must say i cant help but feel attached to the characters. i am wondering if you ever thought of having this published and printed on paper? i would love to own a copy.
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Musicallover1234 Featured By Owner May 18, 2011  Student Writer
I don't know how i would deal with it if i was in Rain's position, but i would deal with it. Good page.
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mayfirerose Featured By Owner May 18, 2011
I would be too nervous to approach him. I would hope he would come to me.
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vidwatcher1121 Featured By Owner May 18, 2011
*In regards to the artist comment question*
Easy. I'm too much of a wuss to confront him. That 'wussery' is also why I mostly lurk on the internet. *glances around, steps back into the shadows*
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majorkerina Featured By Owner May 18, 2011  Student Writer
Awww ^^
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