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RAIN p.55 - Wandering Off by JocelynSamara RAIN p.55 - Wandering Off by JocelynSamara
(It's a few minutes early, but I'm in the middle of something and I don't want to forget about it and be late posting.)

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This page cracks me up. But beyond that, commentary escapes me here for some reason.

All I can think to say is this could get interesting…

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Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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:iconcasylum:
Casylum Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Student General Artist
It cracked me up too <w>
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:iconryu890:
Ryu890 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
XD This amuses me. Rain's face in panals 4-5 made me smile. So congrats Lynn.
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:iconorangedemi:
OrangeDemi Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Rain: 'oooh pretty shiny final fanasty'
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shadowlord19 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wheres rain?
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xX17DaysTilXx Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Omg...my reaction to this being the last page:

"*left arrow...left arrow...LEFT ARROW!!!* Oh wait...that's it? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Must...have...more! >.<"

lol xD
Amazing story ^-^
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Zomgkitty42 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
knowing Rain its most likely a great manga that she saw.
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LightningMegaRaichu Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011
Lol rain ran off.
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UsagiKnight Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
RIght off the top of my head, I can only guess that she saw the latest Kaminari. Why else would a tg otaku just wonder away from the safety of her friends. But crap pot theories aside.

I enjoy this as an intermission and the panel layout is the best example to teach someone the flow of time. Of coarse we have the foreground to explain the situation, but we also have the background telling us 'something is going to happen'. Starting with Rain feeling all shocked, than worried, than a little curious, than straight to happy while leading to just not there. Aflow like this can almost make me think "oh, what will go wrong". But than again/ that is why I read.

Along with that I have to admit I'm happy you can multi-task. Most beginning comic artist tend to have barren pages with little detail along with only one character to explain things. This page also demonstrates your best trait, characters, though your external details need work, you made up for it in these character details and devided interest (if that can be understood^-^). You have really made sure that it was the best it can be and am happy to say you are rising. Though you have a while till you reach Rumiko Takahashi status. I hope I can also measure up when I start a webcomic myself.

But either way, happy to be commenting regularly again. And as a fellow dreamer, it is the best respect.
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ddefeat1 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
best series ever
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sophienouveau Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:thumbsup:
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kidotrar Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I thoroughly and wholeheartedly agree.
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dolphin64575 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Funny Background Event [link]
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dragon8writer Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
Gaaaaaah! I missed a rain update. ;_;

It's a good page. :)
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Professional Writer
I don't know if I'd call seeing it half a day later "missing an update", but maybe that's just me. ^_^

Anywho, I'm glad you liked it! :D
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dragon8writer Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
It's Rain.


Missing it by five minutes is missing it. ;_; (Sadly, I often miss it, due to not watching the time enough. *Sighs* :P
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DivineValley Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
Rain reminds me of my brother at the mall. Turn away for a second. Poof.
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Musicallover1234 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Student Writer
Its a talk man to man, that pretty funny. I love how Rain starts to walk away and Maria and Rain are going to be alone together hmmm. I look forward to what is going to happen to Rain, and hopefully Maria will find Rain.
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Animasword Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That look in Rain's eye...I get the feeling she's spotted some new manga :lol:
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dolphin64575 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfblikeplz:
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smchronos Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
Rain is as adorable as ever. :)
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vidwatcher1121 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
Rudy is too awesome to be described. :)
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majorkerina Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Student Writer
I bet Rain saw something cute ^^. Love the background action there.
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adragonknight Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
ofcours rudy is manly. seeing as he breaks some kind of fourth wall here? he must be an omnipotent entity and thus the true epitomi of what a man is.

i got to stop playing epic rpg's. also i like what rain did, done that myself sometimes :) cute rain is cute
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Yitomic Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
Your commentary walked off while you had your back to it
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dolphin64575 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfblikeplz:
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Professional Writer
Good point. My commentary must've seen something shiny, perhaps. It all makes perfect sense now. ^_^
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PrincessJessica Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
Ooh, where did Rain go? :D

nice job
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VIII-Bit Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
Rudy's fourth wall breaking stare in the first panel just shows he's telling us he's got a plan brewing. I love it.

Also, I can't help but think Rain wandering off will bring trouble. Whenever ANY character wanders off in a story, it usually means bad news. Despite that little fact, I doubt anything will go wrong... I mean, Rain's a big girl. She can go off on her own without any trouble. Right? o_oU
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chucarnaj-peace Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
where did rain go?
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Nelekra Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
I find the "guys" comment kind of ironic xD.. I kinda dislike it when people go, hey man how are you, when I'm Ashley
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superdeformedchibi Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Professional Artisan Crafter
I don't blame you. It happens to my sweetie a lot, too. Sometimes it happens in reverse, like when she's at work (but is dressed like "he" because she's not "out" at work) and a few of our (well-intentioned) friends will be like "Hey, Jocelyn, what's up?" I can manage to flip to between the two situations rather effortlessly now (after lots of practice!) but our other friends aren't quite as invested in it, I guess.
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Nelekra Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
Ah I see, yeah that must suck for her :< Lol that's pretty funny that they do that, yeah I bet it took a lot of practice. I just thought it was esoteric a bit ^_^; Even in guy mode I don't like it at all :<
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superdeformedchibi Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Professional Artisan Crafter
It's gotta be better than being called "bro". I hate that crap!
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Nelekra Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
Yeah I do too...
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Professional Writer
Ugh. So true. My roommate has known about me for YEARS and still persists to greet me with "what's up, man?" no matter how feminine I look. It's gotten to the point where I've given up trying to correct him because I don't think he'll ever get it. ^^;
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Nelekra Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
Ah I hate that :< Yeah most people are just too dense to care. :< :hug: at least you have some people who do!
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superdeformedchibi Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Professional Artisan Crafter
Yeah, but consider the source. Some of our friends call me "dude" and I don't look even remotely masculine (no matter what the 3DS says!) Of course, I do tend to act a little more manly than you so that might be the reason.
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sophienouveau Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, same sort of problem for me. Everytime the 3ds scans my face he says: baby (male). ^^
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Extermanet Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
Rain must have seen the book store, cause that's how my sister acts when she wants new manga :D
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Goodwrangler3 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
I got a laugh out of Rain in the background. Something seems to have her full focus at the moment.
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Undertaker972 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
lol wow, i wonder where Rain went off to?
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StoryTypist Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
Yep. He truly is the epitome of manliness. Manly. He must use...OLD SPICE.

Oh Rain. I do hope you're looking at manga. I would, if I were you :D.
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superdeformedchibi Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Professional Artisan Crafter
Ugh, I hate Old Spice. Smells more like Old Ass.
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:iconstorytypist:
StoryTypist Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
I've never smelled it before, but there's nothing worse than Axe.
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superdeformedchibi Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Professional Artisan Crafter
You have a great point! I actually get asthma attacks from guys that wear too much crAxe.
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:iconstorytypist:
StoryTypist Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
Ahaha. It does smell like crap. And it gets in your throat and nose whenever someone sprays it.
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slightly-shotgunned Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
I saw this and immediately thought of my ex. Because she used to do that to me...ALL the time...only...while I was talking to HER!

lol good times.
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Professional Writer
Oh, that must've been fun to deal with. ^^;
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slightly-shotgunned Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
Barrels and barrels of fun it was not. =P
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naruto3322 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011
lol XD
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