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RAIN p.55 - Wandering Off by JocelynSamara RAIN p.55 - Wandering Off by JocelynSamara
(It's a few minutes early, but I'm in the middle of something and I don't want to forget about it and be late posting.)

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This page cracks me up. But beyond that, commentary escapes me here for some reason.

All I can think to say is this could get interesting…

Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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Casylum Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Student General Artist
It cracked me up too <w>
Ryu890 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
XD This amuses me. Rain's face in panals 4-5 made me smile. So congrats Lynn.
OrangeDemi Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Rain: 'oooh pretty shiny final fanasty'
shadowlord19 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wheres rain?
xX17DaysTilXx Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer reaction to this being the last page:

"*left arrow...left arrow...LEFT ARROW!!!* Oh wait...that's it? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Must...have...more! >.<"

lol xD
Amazing story ^-^
Zomgkitty42 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
knowing Rain its most likely a great manga that she saw.
elitepikachu9019 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011
Lol rain ran off.
UsagiKnight Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
RIght off the top of my head, I can only guess that she saw the latest Kaminari. Why else would a tg otaku just wonder away from the safety of her friends. But crap pot theories aside.

I enjoy this as an intermission and the panel layout is the best example to teach someone the flow of time. Of coarse we have the foreground to explain the situation, but we also have the background telling us 'something is going to happen'. Starting with Rain feeling all shocked, than worried, than a little curious, than straight to happy while leading to just not there. Aflow like this can almost make me think "oh, what will go wrong". But than again/ that is why I read.

Along with that I have to admit I'm happy you can multi-task. Most beginning comic artist tend to have barren pages with little detail along with only one character to explain things. This page also demonstrates your best trait, characters, though your external details need work, you made up for it in these character details and devided interest (if that can be understood^-^). You have really made sure that it was the best it can be and am happy to say you are rising. Though you have a while till you reach Rumiko Takahashi status. I hope I can also measure up when I start a webcomic myself.

But either way, happy to be commenting regularly again. And as a fellow dreamer, it is the best respect.
ddefeat1 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
best series ever
sophienouveau Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
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