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RAIN p.46 - Open Up by JocelynSamara RAIN p.46 - Open Up by JocelynSamara
(Posting early, but not because I'm tired. Rather, it's because I'm doing something else at the moment and want to make sure I don't forget and run late.)

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Oh, man. This page never stops being horribly awkward.

Originally, I was going to make this page cause even more uncomfortable writhing; that is, it was going to be ENTIRELY Kellenís questions followed up by Rainís one word answers. I decided I could progress things a little better by adding Faraís little segment at the end though. Besides, a whole page of a lazily drawn image copy/pasted that many times could get pretty tiring. I even decided to have Rain turn her head once or twice to avoid that.

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Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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Brixmon Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
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This page? THIS PAGE? The whole series is incredibly awkward!
:)
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Wiinner159 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
My life in a nutshell, in terms of awkward that is
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UsagiKnight Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
This is definitely a page I didn't want to rush into commentary with. But I will say its up their with Ryan's first confrontation with Gavin in terms of my favorite pages.

Starting with the speech. Hearing Ryan 'talk' (what I used when Rain isn't talking femininely) really is a sign of emotional insecurity. Like he can't justify what he is doing and therefore can't seem to talk.

Couple this with Kellen saying 'do you hate me' really adding to such insecurity and leaving Ryan unable to explain anything. It is especially since Ryan loves his sister and wants to bond with her. As evidence by such hesitance.

The stationary camera for Ryan/Kellen's conversation was also useful. If Rain confessed and was accepted she would be changing positions and maybe getting something to eat while she gossiped. But as Ryan, its that feeling of a little kid. To sit down, be quiet, and be good. That is unfortunately the mentality that Rain/Ryan as well as other TG youths put themselves in as they talk to people they love but never confessed too. But as a sibling, I know we do that because we don't want to break hearts the same way ours were.

All in all, its a beautiful page and as Fara said. Hope that Ryan can eventually open Rain up to her.
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StoryTypist Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011
You seem to be on a roll with posting early :XD:.

And poor Rain. She look so...sad?
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011  Professional Writer
I'm starting to think I should change the official post time to something earlier just to save myself the trouble of saying it all the time. ^^;
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StoryTypist Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2011
Perhaps...
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chihuahua0 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011  Student Writer
I like how she turns her head, and her expressions.

Also, I want to see Rain as Ryan in a future strip (perhaps when Kellen decides to visit).

I still think Aiken is secretly gay.
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011  Professional Writer
There are plans for "Ryan"... but who can say when. :mwahaha:
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chihuahua0 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2011  Student Writer
:lol: at both the emoticon and sig.

"All problems can be solved by having a bear eat them." :lol:
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DivineValley Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2011
This is like conversations with my aunt. So awkward. I love how Puddle is just staring so cute my cat does that while I'm on the phone just stares up at me.
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