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I have mixed feelings about the third row of panels. Itís cute and funny watching her face change as each new thought enters her mind, but I do worry she may have gotten over being sad a little too fast. On the other hand, I hesitate to drag out sadness longer than necessary (at least at this early stage of the game), or I could run the risk of making Rain annoying (which I obviously donít want).
Rudy is of course chatty as always, and it seems like he wants to tell us a story. This should be interesting. ^_^
Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.