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RAIN p.24 - Reputation by JocelynSamara RAIN p.24 - Reputation by JocelynSamara
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I think it’s abundantly clear by now that I like lots of dialogue, but this page has been toned down rather graciously. Originally, I had an entire dialogue in place with Maria telling some funny story, that random boy trying to ask Rain out, and of course, Rain herself just being neurotic. Then a few pages later, I reread this page and thought it sounded AWFUL. So bad in fact, that I just deleted all of the dialogue. With no dialogue bubbles, the “silent” page kinda spoke to. Then the better idea of having Rain narrate over the scene while this short montage of events occurs came to me. And that worked ever so much better. What everyone's actually saying, we just leave up to your imagination. ^_^

Pay no mind to the random guy. He really is just that: a random guy. After the death glare Maria gave to him, I wouldn’t blame him he ran right out of this comic altogether. And we may never see him again…

Or will we…?

Nah. I didn’t care much for his design, so probably not…

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Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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:icondinomaster75:
Dinomaster75 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
STAAAAAAAAAAARRRRE
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:iconjamieagatharose:
JamieAgathaRose Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"Nah. I didn’t care much for his design, so probably not…"

And yet... :giggle:
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Wiinner159 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
Just curious but am I the only one who'd actually stare back at Maria if she gave me that stare? I do awkwardly weird things sometimes, it's just a thing that makes me, well me, and who can argue that?
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DragonAnthro5213 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
im laughing so hard i cant breath!
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:iconeunacis:
Eunacis Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Student Writer
Now, I have to adapt the WHOLE series.
...owwwww...
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punkking87 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012
i really do love how this is like alot of anime i have watched this is just super and i cant wait for more!
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NeedsMoreKetchup Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
STAAAAARREEEE....lol LOVE IT
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darkninja1012 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2011
omfg maria has a death stare and its creepy as hell nice touch there its really good and i like the story so far
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mariatamayothewierdo Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011  Student General Artist
hahah her stare XD
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Dark7Hero Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011
XDDD
i loved the evil glare scene
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