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RAIN p.20 - After School by JocelynSamara RAIN p.20 - After School by JocelynSamara
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All of the main cast is gathered, and it's established that certain people may know certain things. Something is about to go down.

Even I'm a little tense. ^_^

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Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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shadowlord19 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hope things work out for rain, again nice work.
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Maiden-Of-The-Maggot Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
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ChaosRLZ Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Things are about to go DOOOOOOOOWN!!
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Musicallover1234 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Student Writer
Rain shouldn't run she going to have to deal with it some how eventually their going to find out so she should just come up with a really good excuse and deal with the consequences, heck maybe Maria will help her be more like a girl you never can tell. But i am getting tense about what will happen next. Can't wait for Wednesday.
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Professional Writer
You're right. She shouldn't run. Running only makes a person look even more like they have something to hide.

That said, under that kind of pressure, it's certainly the more appealing option...
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Musicallover1234 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Student Writer
That's true.
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UsagiKnight Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
So you decided to go out and gather the entire body together (meaning cast). I guess the best way to expose the secret to everyone. Hopefully it turns out well.

Normally I compliment, but here is a confusing moment. The transition from panel two to three really made it awkward as we than go from Rain's shocked expression to Aunt Fara to Gavin and co. To me it would've been more effective to have panel 5 switched with panel 3 (5-3-4). But than again since you need a big panel for Gavin(panel 5) the placement of panels may be a bit confusing.

Now why I brought this up is for the sake of momentum. :hug: I'm really sorry to dis your stuff and I got the idea behind the confrontation between classmates. But if it helps you I want to point it out. Lets just say my honesty, reasons, and mental make-up makes me do what I do. And hope it helps.

Unfortunately, even if Rain would take Fara's advise to run, I don't think her legs would be able to work anymore. Poor, brave kid.
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Professional Writer
My thought process with the panel layout was intentionally meant to show Rain's reaction prior to revealing what she's seeing. It's not an uncommon dynamic used in comics or movies or whatever. It's a surprise dynamic meant to draw out suspense. I'll admit, I think this tends to work better if you have to turn the page to reveal what she sees, but I'm not above experimenting with things.

You'll probably see a number of odd layouts as the comic wears on. Mostly, it's just me fooling around and trying to make something work and stand out at once.

Thank you for pointing it out though. If no one brings these things to my attention, I just assume everything worked out great. Again, because I'm the one writing and drawing it, I have a very different way of looking at it as compared to probably everyone else.
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dolphin64575 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Crossed arms! Mad face! Noes! :noes:
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Professional Writer
i r serious gavin!! :XD:
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