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RAIN p.20 - After School by JocelynSamara RAIN p.20 - After School by JocelynSamara
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All of the main cast is gathered, and it's established that certain people may know certain things. Something is about to go down.

Even I'm a little tense. ^_^

2004-2011
Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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shadowlord19 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hope things work out for rain, again nice work.
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Maiden-Of-The-Maggot Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
:ohnoes:
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ChaosRLZ Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Things are about to go DOOOOOOOOWN!!
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Musicallover1234 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Student Writer
Rain shouldn't run she going to have to deal with it some how eventually their going to find out so she should just come up with a really good excuse and deal with the consequences, heck maybe Maria will help her be more like a girl you never can tell. But i am getting tense about what will happen next. Can't wait for Wednesday.
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Professional Writer
You're right. She shouldn't run. Running only makes a person look even more like they have something to hide.

That said, under that kind of pressure, it's certainly the more appealing option...
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Musicallover1234 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Student Writer
That's true.
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UsagiKnight Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
So you decided to go out and gather the entire body together (meaning cast). I guess the best way to expose the secret to everyone. Hopefully it turns out well.

Normally I compliment, but here is a confusing moment. The transition from panel two to three really made it awkward as we than go from Rain's shocked expression to Aunt Fara to Gavin and co. To me it would've been more effective to have panel 5 switched with panel 3 (5-3-4). But than again since you need a big panel for Gavin(panel 5) the placement of panels may be a bit confusing.

Now why I brought this up is for the sake of momentum. :hug: I'm really sorry to dis your stuff and I got the idea behind the confrontation between classmates. But if it helps you I want to point it out. Lets just say my honesty, reasons, and mental make-up makes me do what I do. And hope it helps.

Unfortunately, even if Rain would take Fara's advise to run, I don't think her legs would be able to work anymore. Poor, brave kid.
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Professional Writer
My thought process with the panel layout was intentionally meant to show Rain's reaction prior to revealing what she's seeing. It's not an uncommon dynamic used in comics or movies or whatever. It's a surprise dynamic meant to draw out suspense. I'll admit, I think this tends to work better if you have to turn the page to reveal what she sees, but I'm not above experimenting with things.

You'll probably see a number of odd layouts as the comic wears on. Mostly, it's just me fooling around and trying to make something work and stand out at once.

Thank you for pointing it out though. If no one brings these things to my attention, I just assume everything worked out great. Again, because I'm the one writing and drawing it, I have a very different way of looking at it as compared to probably everyone else.
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dolphin64575 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Crossed arms! Mad face! Noes! :noes:
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Professional Writer
i r serious gavin!! :XD:
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shanweeboy Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
cuz ppl are taught to hate the differences in people,god help you if your rain,id hide ina pit and wait for college when your more accepted
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LightningMegaRaichu Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
Rain got trouble. She better run as fast as last time.
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Professional Writer
Although, she might just bump into someone again, making the same problem happen all over again... ^^;
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LightningMegaRaichu Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
Yeah. They probably know her secret.
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animeunderwaterfan1 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
Run rain run :lol:
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Professional Writer
Seriously, Rain! Just run! Why are you still standing there!? :XD:
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animeunderwaterfan1 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
he he XD
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Nelekra Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
Definitely tense :3
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Professional Writer
Definitely. There's so many ways this could turn out...
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Nelekra Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
I think I know x3 It might be cause I read so much manga or stuff but it seems a tad predictable and cliche ^^; hope that's not offensive >.<! cause I do love it :D! ^~^ :hug:
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Professional Writer
That's fine. I'm not offended at all. Maybe I'll surprise you with something you didn't expect, and maybe I won't... this time. I realize that sometimes a certain degree of predictability can be inevitable, and that's fine once in a while. I promise I'll have many opportunities to psyche you out later - even if this doesn't - as the plot goes on. ^_^
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Nelekra Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
Thank s^~^ and I hope so <3!! Yeah it happens a lot ^~^ and good! I love it so far though <3 and I love your new icon. I wish someone would draw 1 for me T~T of me lol.
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2011  Professional Writer
<_<... >_>...

Would you like me to try and draw an icon for you? I can't guarantee it'd come out good (my drawings of real people pretty rarely look like the actual person), but I could probably give it a shot. If you want, anyway.
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Nelekra Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2011
:blushes: nah it's k xD I don't ask people for that xD I'd feel bad asking :P I just wish I could make a pic of me small enough but not so blurry =\... it's k ^~^
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dragon8writer Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
Eep? :P

*Clings to you tightly out of fear... and possibly a desire to steal your notes*
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Professional Writer
Here. You can have Rain's notes instead. She doesn't want them anyway. ^_^
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dragon8writer Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
;_;

*...Glomps you both anyway* I should still write a story where you get turned into Rain...
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Warmenx Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
Run Rain Run!!!
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011  Professional Writer
She's losing valuable running seconds just standing there in fear... ^^;
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StoryTypist Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
Gavin looks maaaaaaaaad~. Face it like a man...erm...woman! :iconx3v2plz:
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Professional Writer
Although, I can't really blame Rain. I might be kinda scared too if I somebody was looking at me like that.
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StoryTypist Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
I would too...:P.
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Enkidude Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
Rain's expression. Priceless.
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Professional Writer
That would be her "Oh, sh--! I'm gonna die" face. :XD:
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PrincessJessica Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
LOL last panel hilarious

great job
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you! Glad you liked it! :D
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smchronos Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
Ha ha. I love this comic so much.
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you! I'm always ecstatic to hear that. ^_^
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Undertaker972 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
damn, Rain is screwed! not only does she know that they know but her aunt is gonna kill her for not being able to keep her identity a secret!
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Professional Writer
Poor Rain... ^^;
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Undertaker972 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2011
yea its no wonder she doesnt faint from the stress of the situation
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MichealDomo Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
Rain better haul ass.
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Professional Writer
I dunno if Rain can run fast enough. Aunt Fara's still got the car. :XD:
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chucarnaj-peace Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
jajajaja good i like it poor rain
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Professional Writer
Seriously. That poor kid just can't win. ^^;
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chucarnaj-peace Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
yeah totaly agree °-°b
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suessygirl Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
oh goshie why doesnt this comic come out any faster? :P
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Professional Writer
Sorry. I wish I could release them faster too. ^^;
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suessygirl Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
nah its cool ^_^
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velven1001 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011
oh man she is a cold heated, but loving person.... interesting aunt
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