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RAIN p.17 - Thought Process by JocelynSamara RAIN p.17 - Thought Process by JocelynSamara
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Awk~ward-! ^_^

Well, that probably could have gone better…

To avoid confusion, I’m just going to come right out and tell you this new boy that Rain’s bumped into is named Rudy. He’s Maria’s little brother. Normally, I’d prefer to let the story do the talking, but as I was reviewing the story before posting this, I realized that no one actually addresses him by name for another six pages. So, rather than having comments consist of people calling him “that kid” or something for roughly another two weeks, I’ll just make it easy for you and tell you straight out: it’s Rudy. ^_^

On a side note, Gavin and Maria are still sitting at the lunch table where Rain was eating, waiting for her to come back. Originally, I considered showing them divvying up the remainder of her lunch for humor’s sake. But after more thought, that just seemed like a really jerk thing to have them do… ^^;

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Turai Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
I'm actually deeply disturbed, is it really that bad that you could get in trouble with the school staff for this where you live?
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foggyland1 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011
hey i've read rain up to date, then cycled back through all the x-tra rain things and i just wondered something as i begun to read through rain for the second time:

u said in the question and answer page that rain uses 'padding' to give her womanly curves, if this is indeed true couldn't a type of 'padding' be used to cover what may have been seen in the last page and discussed here.

by the way - i reeeaallly don't want to sound whiney or nit picky but just wondering, curiosity you know.

ps. cant wait for the next ones.
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AmmyKaabiiPupupu Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2011
...Shit, almost forgot she's at a religious school...
She has one of those "YOU ARE THE INCARNATION OF THE DEVIL DIE DIE DIE" speeches in store doesn't she? poor girl...
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Tigerfestivals Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If they give her that kind of speech, they're not a very good religious school...
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Enkidude Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
I facepalmed on the last page.
Now; Forehead, meet my laptop's keyboard.

uuuuuszrisrtttttgs
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011  Professional Writer
At this rate, there'll end up being a page that causes you to run and jump into a brick wall. I mean, I probably wouldn't recommend that though.
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Enkidude Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2011
I'll be sending my medical bill. :P
Nah, I won't. This is good stuff!
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Undertaker972 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011
wow rudy's about to rat Rain out lol
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IrateResearchers Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011
dun dun DUUN
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DivineValley Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011
Well shit the little snot is gonna squel!!!! I'l get the rope!!!!
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