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The title was supposed to be "It's a Small World After All". SmackJeeves and Comic Fury allow long page titles; so why not DA?
Gavin and Maria, once again so close to the truth, and yet so far. Rainís compelling response to Gavinís question (ie. - running the hell away) has helped to keep her secret safe for the time being, but was that really the best move?
I have to be honest. Iím not crazy about this page. Looking back, I think I couldíve probably condensed this page and the last page into one to make things move along a little quicker. But then Iíd have had less time to establish foreshadowing for Maria in the last page, and Rainís fear of discovery on this page. Okay, so maybe condensing isnít quite what Iím looking for, but I still feel like I could have done better with these two pages.
Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.