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RAIN p.12 - Freaking Out by JocelynSamara RAIN p.12 - Freaking Out by JocelynSamara
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Rain and Aunt Fara bicker. Hilarity ensues. I can already tell you these are going to be some of my favorite pages to do. ^_^

I hope no one minds the jumpy flow of time. The story may be set in a high school, but Im just going to bore the snot out of everyone if I waste time showing every class. Youll get to see more classes and teachers in time when you need to.

Also, Aunt Fara is still at the school because shes a teacher. An art teacher to be exact. Apparently, fourth period is an off period for her if shes just sitting around on the internets though.

And finally, yes, Aunt Fara was browsing my DeviantArt page, because I dont know the meaning of shame.

2004-2010
Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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DazedDaisiesO-o Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is definitely one of my fave pages. :lmao:
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Pseudowitch Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
I stumbled upon your comic and find it very amusing so far. This boy is quickly learning that a girl's life is not as easy as he might have thought. I add to interactive stories along these lines on Writing.com. If your interested, let me know, I'll send you a link.
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MelodieRox Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Story of my life: being freaked out by guys. ;p This comic is awesome.
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whitefox00 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That seems really awesome and unrealistic for a trans-girl, but I guess characters from comics are supposed to look cute. Or maybe I just don't get out enough. x.x

I love the left-eye thing. It's like an unintentional recurring theme. ^ ^
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akainu0 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2011
I don't blame you about throwing in your DeviantArt page.

I also am a shameless self promoter.

See my FanFiction.net profile [link]
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Blufire1992 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011  Student Writer
"This is just from fourth period."
Best. Line. Ever...
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Maiden-Of-The-Maggot Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
:iconblushplz: rain is adorable!

O: thats alot of guys wantin' to go out with her!!
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Professional Writer
I guess all these guys agree with you. ^_^
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Maiden-Of-The-Maggot Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
CX i guess they do!
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UsagiKnight Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Forgot about this in the last comment, so yeah. I wouldnt worry to much about the background. Even McCloud and Fred Gallagher claim that the background has to convey information. Like in page 4 Rain was doing a lot of things before getting ready in the morning (shower, feed puddles, get dressed) so we needed a background to know what she is doing. This page and th page before, we know where the characters are and since the characters arent interacting with anything in the background it can be forgiven. Though you shouldnt be lazy either.

As for this page, i can understand her upset. Everyone thinks people of this condition ask for this. Little do people know that its more about being yourself rather than look for a love interest. And for someone as young as rain she would feel like everything is going so fast. But its no different than kids that skip grades.

Let me put it this way. Because kids can skip grades doesnt mean they should. There classmates have physically and emotionally matured at the same time so they kind of can handle themselves in public. So if you apply that to rain, everything that has been learned over many years need to be learned in only a couple of hours. It really is a sad thing especially when she has a secret to keep.

As a creator. be thankful for a webcomic, in japan it won't be as easy. If you think about 16-60 pages in a shonen manga submitted every week really is an intimidating thing though you love to draw. Not long when you think about inking, toning, coloring, shading, etc. Trust me that I wish that you submitted more pages. I know this is your current level, and to sacrifice storytelling for more pages a week really isn't worth it. Again, glad I can be excited for yor story to come to life.
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