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RAIN p.11 - Oh, the Irony... by JocelynSamara RAIN p.11 - Oh, the Irony... by JocelynSamara
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And here we have the first page to not feature the title character herself. Gavin and Maria’s discussion here amuses me so. So close, yet so far… ^_^

Artistically though, this page is a little (very) boring and subpar compared to the rest of the comic. Lazy backgrounds or lack thereof will happen sometimes. I only hope the dialogue makes up for that.

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Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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dreisteine Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015
The link to page 12 seems to be broken...
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SophSenkai Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lul nail on the head there isnt it :D?
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UsagiKnight Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Ho.....ly......SH**

This does not bode well, especially since to make such jokes would make the universe contained. meaning that anything can happen and at the same time nothing is happenstance. No matter how weird it would be, considering that it has been thought of makes it real. A good example of how cool it would be to have sliding doors only to have them now. That may pale in comparison to guessing she was a boy and now recieved the truth. But I really think it shows the point.

But at the same time it must have been expected. Even when you transition you are still unable to get away from those you once knew. Even with name change, transition, and even an out of state move you still can't escape. Yuuko from XxxHolic (one of my faves) says it best when she said "you and I became involved" Meaning that when that happens they are bound by a sngle cause. It can be sad, comforting, and even inimidating. Consiering that both friends and rivals end up finding a way back to each other. Especially for you and your friends. You came onto this sight to help out with your future only to find yourselk unable to get away from anyone you know. And since most share a similar wish, its unknown how far any of us will be from each other. As I said, both scary and comforting.

But anyway, onto the comic, I really love where its going on now I'm worried about how this will turn out. Hopefully Gavin nor Rain won't be hurt to much from this collision. And seriously, never expected Gavin to know Ryan before the other kids. It is surprising and so anxiety enducing.

(more rant's Jesus)
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010  Professional Writer
Ah, the twists of life. Stranger than fiction, indeed. ^_^

I'm delighted to hear that this development has proven very interesting and exciting to you and everyone else. And knowing what happens next doesn't make things any less exciting for me.
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UsagiKnight Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
True, it is the predictability that makes us sit at the edge of our seats waiting for it to happen. :hug: look forward to were you take the story and hope you are excited as well.
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PrincessJessica Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010
lol awesome :)
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
Thank you! :D
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DivineValley Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010
This made me just laugh like a nut. I would find it ironic if everyone was made of iron!...sorry I just had to say it.
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
Forgiven. ^_^

I'm glad you liked it! :D
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Suki-chan36 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010
That...... was...... AMAZING. xD
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
I'm glad you enjoyed it SO MUCH!! :D
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Suki-chan36 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010
Truly, I like Maria even more now. If she's supposed to be the more toned-down one, I can't wait to meet Rudy. xD
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
Heh. And incidentally, I can't wait to introduce Rudy. ^_^

Alas, it will still be a little while.
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Suki-chan36 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010
Makes sense, seeing as Rain still has to meet Maria and Gavin. If Rudy were thrown into the mix right off the bat, poor Rain would probably be reduced to a pile of socially awkward goo! =(
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Musicallover1234 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Student Writer
I wonder if they are really going to find out the truth.
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
Heh. :D
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:iconmusicallover1234:
Musicallover1234 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Student Writer
Hmmm. Then maybe they are going to find out.
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OrangeDemi Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i smell a drama storm a commin'!
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
Oh, it's comin' all right. :XD:
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:iconorangedemi:
OrangeDemi Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hahaha i knew it :3
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Maiden-Of-The-Maggot Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
gavin is in for a suprise o:
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
Oh, my... yes. :D
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Maiden-Of-The-Maggot Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
dun dun dun! D:>
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SHarles25 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010
well, unless they are family, why they aren't a couple those 2 already hehe ;)

They are so friendly looking
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
This question will be answered in due time. ^_^
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Chicken-Yuki Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010   Traditional Artist
Didn't expect a plot twist right off the bat. Wow.... ^^;
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
I like plot twists. :D

Besides, I wanted to make sure I had something to keep people interested even very early on in the story. ^_^
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StoryTypist Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2010
Oooooh...it's getting a bit dangerous for Rain... xD
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
No one ever said it was going to be eas for her.

Although... she probably thought it was going to be easier than this... ^^;
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StoryTypist Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010
True, true. Maybe her life will be easier if she ever goes through the TG operation.

You spelled easy wrong.
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shanweeboy Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2010
oo this is gona be good.....
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
Heh. I'm looking forward to it too! :D
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runningbull731 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2010
Keep the awesomeness rolling!!! cant wait for the next page
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
Thank you! Me neither! :XD:
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dragon8writer Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2010
Oh, god... I can't decide whether it's contrived, brilliant, or both. :P

Her rubbing in "She's totally a dude" seems a little fake, but the scenario is just too perfect... which makes it both brilliant AND contrived, somehow? 0,o

If knew "Ryan" better, he might have at least had a better inkling... Personally, i just figure he recognized the teacher's name. :P

*Gives you the usually squishy hug/glomp* keep up the good work, and don't worry so much about the individual comic's background! :P Not that you seem to be worried too much, but being told that by a fan/friend is always a bonus, in my opinion. :D

The comic is good, so there's nothing to make up for.
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
I didn't think it sounded so fake, but maybe that's just because I'm me. I've probably been privy to a lot of unusual conversations (pertaining to this topic) that most groups of friends probably don't typically discuss. Still, even if it was perhaps a little over-the-top, I'm glad it didn't appear to ruin the scene for you.

And thank you for forgiving my backgroundless page. I'm not really too concerned with it myself, honestly, but I guess I am worried that it might be a deal breaker for someone. So yes, it is actually quite pleasing to hear it's not detrimental to your opinion of the comic.
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dragon8writer Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010
*Nods* perhaps - I just wasn't sure about the amount of repetition followed by the quickly having it taken it back. :P (Usually, though you can't really do it in dialogue, i'd just have them stick out a tongue rather than back down if they'd gone on that long; but i don't really know how conversations like that would go, no.)

*Hugs* I'm glad. :D

People view comics for the art to an extent but - I at least - tend to view them for the dialogue; bad art can detract, good art can make it work, but without the dialogue it's just a series of pictures... nice, and all, but you wouldn't be reading it as a comic. :P

You have a good plot, a fun idea, and a heroine who brings much desire to hug. :D
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dolphin64575 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
hahahahahhahahahhaahha XD Oh, Gavin, what are the chances?
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
Those ARE some pretty crazy convenient odds, aren't they? :XD:
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animeunderwaterfan1 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2010
this story is really heating up :)
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! :D
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animeunderwaterfan1 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010
your welcome :)
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:iconfakenameyfakenamey:
fakenameyfakenamey Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2010
Of course the question now is why these two aren't already going out :P
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:iconjocelynsamara:
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
This question will be answered in due time as well. ^_^
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fakenameyfakenamey Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010
DUN DUN DUUUUUN!

I look forward to it ;)
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Warmenx Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2010
Well she is right, they just dont know it. I cant wait to see their reactions when they find out.
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JocelynSamara Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2010  Professional Writer
It should be interesting. ^_^
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