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RAIN ch.3 - Normal People by JocelynSamara RAIN ch.3 - Normal People by JocelynSamara
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Itís inadvertent, but this one kinda reminds me of neapolitan ice cream. That aside, I really like it. ^_^ Anyway, thereíre a number of significant things to note (but Iím only pointing out the most obvious two):

No school uniforms
- This chapter will be the first to take place almost entirely outside of the school setting. People have wanted it, Iíve wanted to do it, and finally my chance has come. Should be fun.

That girl on the right
- You donít know her yet. Yes, Iím still introducing characters. Thereíll be three new ones in this chapter, but I donít foresee any need to add more for a while afterward. Not to say I donít have more characters planned, but it will probably be a long time after this chapter before I bring any other new folks in.

Other subtler things
- I dunno. Thereíre a lot of things. Most of it will be more obvious by the end of the chapter.

Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
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Fallenangel2002 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
i love how you made her fav book smaller it's so cool how much detail there is
puddintane Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2011  Student General Artist
This is my favorite chapter so far.
ComissarReznov Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
>////< I can't help but wish this was me, I mean I'm so afraid of what people would think If I said I wanted to be a girl..... I really wish we could be able to change genders..
chihuahua0 Featured By Owner May 5, 2011  Student Writer
I can't stop from looking at how she holds up her breasts. Wow...
JocelynSamara Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Professional Writer
Can't stop looking, can ya? :XD:
chihuahua0 Featured By Owner May 8, 2011  Student Writer
UsagiKnight Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
This comment is posted on the same day as I began reading chapter 3. I know you would want me to be unjudgemental on comments. So I post a comment before reading the next page. Hope that is okay.

To be honest, seeing the transgender pride flag for the first time really made me think of ice cream as well. It wasn't until this pic that I realize that the colors are for boys, girls, and those in between. Kind of stupid to say that, but I'm glad to learn it from you.

long with the normal questions, I can question their placement. Rain is in the center reading, telling me that she is more of an observer in this chapter. Gavin is looking away telling me that he may deal with some real personal issues. The girl on the right, by simple understanding, must be a catalyst to confront Gavin with his problems. The problems, however, are probably the simplicist to figure out. Most likely its in the title, and how its perceived.

Either way, it will be great to have a moment to read about Gavin, all in all I still don't believe him to be an ass. If anything, he is no different than Rain. Being young and confused as he finds his own way in life. That thought alone makes this a difficult chapter to swallow for anyone. But on the other end, I would see the girl as cute, but her pose is really thatof a strong independant woman. And her expression probably says she won't deal with belly aching for long.

Either way, that's my theory. Hope it holds water through the chapter.
Chicken-Yuki Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011   Traditional Artist
What is normal, anyway?

Such a concept has been lost to me in days long past...
naminenam Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2011  Student Digital Artist
i cant wait to see what come in this chapter
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