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RAIN ch. 11 - Big Brother by JocelynSamara RAIN ch. 11 - Big Brother by JocelynSamara
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Funny enough, after ten chapters of this comic, we still know next to nothing about Rainís family. Rainís mother and siblings show up in the prologue (but of course, we know why her mom isnít in the comic due to a revelation in Chapter 6) and the father has still not been seen (and barely mentioned) thus far. Rainís older sister, Kellen, makes some brief cameos now and again, usually talking to Fara over the phone. And then thereís Aiken, Rainís older brother (and Kellenís twin) whom Ė outside of the prologue Ė has appeared in one panel of one page up until now.

Aikenís presence as the sole character on this chapter page should probably clue you in to the fact that things are going change a little here. If I do say so myself, I think people are really going to like this upcoming arc. Hereís hoping Iím right. As always, I will be delighted to hear your thoughts and predictions and whatnot.

Also, before I forget and nobody sees it, I should probably add that the next page will be up on Monday. Iím going back to three posts a week, every Monday, Wednesday and Friday. ^_^

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a-ron93 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
My guess is, that he and (possibly) his fiancee are coming to visit/stay with Fara and Rain for some time, causing Rain to either hide who she is, or tell the truth
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Peacebird99 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student Artist
Yus!! Totally giving credit to you for inspiration of my current project. 1: Because this is awesome. 2: Kinda have to XD
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Musicallover1234 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student Writer
Well i get the feeling that Aiken is about to find out about his little brother the question is how it will affect Rain. It will defiantly be a fun chapter.
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robynpaulson Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
As always, eagerly awaiting new pages! And Yay for three-day-a-week updates! ^_^

Since we don't know much about Rain's family (and what we do know doesn't seem to be very pretty...) I'm gonna guess that we'll have hijinks at least, if not some outright doooooooom in the air. Personally, I'm hoping not and that everything works out for our dear Rain...I would hate to see her crying!
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Doomdragon Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh god... He was kidnapped by the Alaskan mafia wasn't he?
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jordanhitman Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
Alaskan mafia? You are funny.
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Doomdragon Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*bows* Thank you thank you
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jordanhitman Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
Looking for this? :bow:
:clap:
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Doomdragon Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh wow, had no idea they had an emote for that...
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jordanhitman Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
Well now you know :)
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1manydragon Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student Artist
does he even know his bro is crossdressing
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On2XSecretProbation Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
What is Rain going to do if her brother shows up? Is she going to have to go back to being Ryan?
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Animasword Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well this should be interesting. It's hard to tell what it's going to be about from the cover (aside from the fact that Aiken is involved), but a thought that springs to mind is that if Aiken is in a load of trouble and is asking to stay, then Rain is going to have to meet her family members in person for the first time in a while, and since she's made a lot of changes since then....well it'll be interesting to see how Aiken reacts.
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coffinstufferd Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
Yay three posts!

Is it weird that Aiken comes into play close to this Akin guy shooting his mouth off about rape? Their names are "a kin."
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On2XSecretProbation Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
HA!

I love puns.
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moonpuppy4 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
awesome!!! I'm been wanting to know more about him for so long :D
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14bj337 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
For sure, I am looking forward to this upcoming chapter. I've long awaited a "family reunion" of sorts, and I'd love to see how Rain and Fara relate to Aiken. Will Rain come out as she truly is? Or will she hide behind the "Ryan" her family knows, and tries to love?

As far as the cover itself goes... I feel it could be a lot better. While Aiken is, no doubt, well-drawn, it looks like it was hastily put together. Like, Aiken's a "black sheep" whose past few years have remained a secret - I think it would make more sense for him to be staring in another direction, or downward, than to be looking straight at the "camera". The very bleak background... it looks kind of like fog, kind of like rain, but mostly like TV static. The former two make sense with him coming into their home, while the latter makes sense with his TV appearance. Still, it feels remarkably vacant... I just think it would be better if it included, say, Rain and Fara with worried expressions on their face, to highlight the potential for conflict.

Of course, you're the writer. I'm just a reader who gives critiques. I'll say, at least, that this cover page has left me a little more pumped for this upcoming chapter. I'm looking forward to it!
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Undertaker972 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
well i cant wait to see what happens :D
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Razzp Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
Can't wait! :D
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KingInYellowTatters Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
I'm achin' for more Aiken. :D

*Is beaten mercilessly for the pun*
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